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  • HOLD ME Countdown – An Interview with Lucas Vasco

    6 Days to Release Day!

    For those of you who don’t know, FBI Special Agent Lucas Vasco is the hero of my book, HOLD ME. In this post, I’m chatting with Luc to touch base and find out how he’s doing. On Thursday, I’ll post my interview with Katie, the heroine of the book.

    Luc and I met at his home in the wilds of New Jersey. Driving up to the massive structure Luc calls the “Museum” made me feel quite nostalgic. I’d spent so much time in the place over the last year or two, that seeing it again was like seeing an old friend. Spot, Luc’s Newfoundland, came bounding around the side the building just as I got out of the car. It can be quite intimidating to see a Newf coming at you in full gallop, but I’d dealt with Spot before and I have friends with many big dogs. I knew what to do – stand still, close your eyes, and let the wave of dog envelope you. If you pretend you’re a tree on a windy day, you usually won’t get knocked down. Usually.

    Luc came to the door, yelled at Spot, and restored order. He was dressed the way he always is – t-shirt, cargo pants, and old running shoes. I’m not ashamed to say that my heart went pitty-pat when he smiled at me. Then he walked over to me and hugged me for several long moments. I held on. I was so, so happy to see him again. Besides, hugging him felt…good.

    Next Luc took me on a quick tour of the Museum so I could see some changes he was making. Fortunately the structure had sustained no damage either in the earthquake or due to Hurricane Irene, although Luc told me they’d lost power for a couple of days. We finally settled down in his big living room, sitting in two armchairs on opposite sides of an unlit fireplace. Spot ambled in, dropped down onto the rug between us, and immediately began snoring. Every so often Luc would reach out and rub her back with his foot.

    I pulled out my stenopad. Before I opened it, I looked around the big room.

    “Your house is magnificent,” I told Luc. I was surprised when his face closed down, his eyes hidden by thick, black lashes.

    “Thank you,” he said formally.

    “How long has it been in the family?” I asked, flustered. I should have known better, but I tend to chatter and say stupid things when I’m flustered.

    “A long time.” He stared into the fireplace, expression grim. “Apparently.”

    Mentally I cursed myself for not remembering what a sore point the house was for him. Clearing my throat, I turned to my notes and tried to recover.

    “Anyway, thanks for seeing me.”

    “Of course.” He smiled and life came back into those beautiful dark eyes. “I’ve missed you.”

    I swallowed hard and his grin broadened.

    “Er…yes.” I adjusted my glasses, then looked at him seriously. “I want to try to stay out of spoiler territory here, so behave.”

    “Yeah, good luck with that. What do we have to talk about that’s not a spoiler?”

    “Well…” I shuffled papers. He did have a point. “How do you feel?”

    “Good.” He cocked his head. “Why? Want to put me through the wringer again?”

    “No,” I said, offended. “I just noticed that you were limping a little bit.”

    “Oh, that.” he waved it off. “It’s nothing. I turned my ankle.”

    “You did? How?”

    “Well, see, I was moving some furniture around in one of the parlors. Katie keeps insisting that I claim the house, and I was getting ready to claim that room. I tripped over a lamp.”

    “Ah hah.” I knew how Luc went about claiming the house, so I didn’t think I should go any further.

    “But you’re okay now?”

    “Sure.” He flapped a hand. “No problem.”

    Maybe I should have postponed this interview until the book had been out a while. Then I thought of a topic I’d been meaning to discuss with him.

    “So, Luc,” I flipped a few pages in my stenopad to get to the right notes, then looked up at him. “You like books.”

    [NOTE: Please join me on the Carina Press blogthe morning of September 8th, to read the section of this interview where Luc and I talk about his books. For now, let’s pick things up at the end of that part of the conversation.]

    We sat in silence for a few moments. When I got up the nerve to look at him again, he was obviously laughing at me. His dark eyes sparkled as he watched me try to pull myself together.

    “Shut up!” I said. “Sue me if talking about books pushes some buttons for me. And stop playing all sexy and mysterious.”

    “What?” He held his hands out to the side. “I’m not playing. I am sexy and mysterious.”

    “You’re toying with me.” I insisted.

    “Only because you’re easy.”

    “Oh, please. You jerked me around for months.”

    “You SHOT me!”

    “I did not shoot you. I TORMENTED you.”

    “Oh, that is just so much better.” He rolled his eyes. “Every time I turned around something else was getting f***ed up until you finished the damn book. And that took for freaking ever! You’re lucky I didn’t just go insane and attack you.”

    “You DID attack me.” I jabbed a finger at my temple. “You attacked me in my MIND.”

    “Right.” He snorted.

    Spot woke up and sat, looking from one to the other of us with apparent confusion. I shifted so I could see around her.

    “Are you going to cooperate or not?” I demanded.

    “Of course I’m going to cooperate. I live to cooperate.”

    I humphed because I didn’t believe him. “I knew I should have talked to Katie first.”

    “Wait.” He held up a hand, palm out. “You’re going to talk to Katie?”

    “Yes, I’m going to see her right now.” I closed my stenopad and stored it away in my handbag. “And I’m sure she’ll be nicer to me than you are.”

    “Probably.” He was grumbling, but I could tell he was considering his situation. He knew damn well that if Katie found out he’d been mean to me, there would be hell to pay. And it wouldn’t all come from the author. “Don’t run off. You just got here.”

    “I have places to go.”

    “Come on.” He gave me his most winning smile. “Ask me something. You know you want to.”

    “Well…” I shifted. I really did want to ask him some questions, so against my better judgment, I gave in. “Okay. What’s next for you? What are you going to do now?”

    He steepled his fingers under his chin and thought for quite some time before he answered.

    “I think I’m going to get some chickens. Spot will like chasing them around the yard,” he said.

    I slammed the door on my way out.

    Join me on Thursday to read my interview with Katie McCabe, heroine of HOLD ME.

  • HOLD ME Countdown – When Katie Met Spot (excerpt)

     
     

    8 Days to Release Day!

     

     

    Holy cow, it’s only 8 days to release day and that means our countdown is moving into the last week. You may consider this the Hurricane Irene version of the countdown, as my power went out this afternoon and I’m posting this via dial-up. That means no cute pictures for you! LOL

    On Thursday I posted a short story of how Luc, hero of HOLD ME, met Spot, canine companion. I thought I should balance the scales and post an excerpt that shows when Katie, the heroine, meets this important woman in Luc’s life.

    Here you go!

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    “What’s that?” To her complete disgust, Katie actually found herself moving closer to Luc for protection.

    He gave her a cheeky grin. “That’s the dragon at the gate.” He managed to push her aside just as a he was assaulted by some kind of a huge animal. Katie backed up, watching the beast snuffle and slobber all over Luc with evident delight while he ruffled large ears and muttered affectionate nonsense. Finally the thing stilled, raised its head and sniffed the air. Katie took another step back. She wasn’t exactly scared, she was just…cautious.

    “So…um…is that a…bear?” she asked.

    Luc laughed. “No, a dog. A Newfoundland.”

    “Ah. Uh, big.”

    “Relax. Spot won’t hurt you.” Luc pulled the animal’s head up so he could give it a loud, smacking kiss between the ears. The gesture was surprisingly sweet.

    Katie shook her own head. “Not that I don’t believe you, but this hasn’t exactly been my day,” she said.

    “Trust me.”

    “Yeah. Sure.” The monster seemed to be as big as a horse, but now that it had settled down a bit it looked like it could be friendly enough. Katie edged her way around Luc until she and the “dog” were staring at each other.

    “Hello…boy?”

    “Spot is a girl,” Luc corrected. “Lady Guinevere of the Round Table if you want to be formal, but Spot for short and no particularly good reason. Just don’t call her boy again, or she might get mad.”

    “Oh, no. Spot mustn’t get mad,” Katie murmured.

    Luc laughed.

    Spot walked over to her, tail waving like a great flag, and Katie finally got up the nerve to hold a hand out to the very large, incredibly wet nose. She half expected to pull back a bloody stump for her trouble, but the dog merely sniffed her fingers and sat, tongue lolling as she panted.

    “Good girl,” Luc said. Katie wasn’t sure which one of them he was talking to.

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    Here’s hoping you all have a happy post-Irene day! 😀

  • HOLD ME Countdown – Bonus Story: When Luc Met Spot

    11 Days To Release Day!

     

    How did Lucas Vasco, tough FBI Special Agent and hero of HOLD ME, end up with Spot, large Newfoundland and canine companion? The story of how the two of them found each other – with the help of a friend – made me smile.

    This short story takes place about two years before the action in HOLD ME. Although it contains hints and teasers, I don’t think there any spoilers. This is a pdf file (until I’m able to create a new blog page).

    I hope you enjoy “When Luc Met Spot.”

     

    When Luc Met Spot

  • HOLD ME Countdown – Meet the Editor: Rhonda Helms

    13 Days To Release Day!

     

    Today I thought it would be fun to have a special celebrity guest star on the blog.

    Writing a book is hard, but editing somebody else’s book has to be even harder.  With skill, wit, and infinite patience, the editor can help the writer uncover her true story.  Then she helps her polish it up all nice and pretty so other people can actually understand what in the heck is going on.  In other words, a good editor ROCKS.

    I was very, very fortunate because HOLD ME was acquired by a really terrific editor at Carina Press – Rhonda Helms.  Rhonda is great at what she does and is just an all-around wonderful person.  I asked her if she’d mind answering a few questions about editing and Carina Press for the blog today, and she graciously agreed.

    Here we go!

    1.  How do manuscripts get to your desk?  In other words, how does the Carina Press submission process work?

    —Two ways: we have one main inbox where submissions come, and then Angela disperses them to us. Or, authors can send me submissions directly (including my current authors).

     

    2.  What attracts you to a manuscript? What do you think makes a manuscript really work?

    —Oy, this is a big question, haha. The biggest thing that draws me to a manuscript would be characters who pull me into their world. We can work on plot issues, but it’s much harder to make a lackluster character shine.

     

    3.  What common mistakes do you see?

    —The biggest issues I see are too much info dump (especially at the beginning), characters who are dull or unappealing, or a story that is technically clean but doesn’t have any spark to it. The latter one is the most painful to reject, because I can see it’s clean and well-written, but doesn’t draw me in.

     

    4.  Do you always read the whole manuscript?  Or do you cut your losses after a certain number of pages?

    —I start by reading up to the first 3 chapters. If it has me hooked, if I see potential, then I read the rest. But there are times I don’t finish the whole manuscript if it falls apart. Some stories I only make it through the first few pages before rejecting.

     

    5. What’s your favorite part about being an editor?

    —Ooooh, one of my fav parts is telling my current authors we want to acquire their manuscripts. Also, I love the content editing process.

     

    6. I know you are also a multi-published author of YA and adult fiction.  Does working as an editor make working on your own fiction harder?

    —Oh wow, good question. I’ve learned SO MUCH about writing from being an editor, about characterization, plotting, etc. But the drawback is, I’m really hard on myself. When I draft, I have to give myself permission to let go and write utter crap. I can always go back and revise later.

     

    7.  Carina Press publishes all genres of adult fiction over 15,000 words.  What are you looking for?  Are there any areas where you or Carina would love to see more submissions?

    —I love romance, but I acquire in pretty much every genre. For me, strong characters sell the story. I’m not looking for perfection–I’m looking for that spark. I’m happy to work with authors if the story pulls me in. I do have a fondness for steamy romances, futuristics, historicals and genre blends (e.g., western fantasy).

     

    Thank you, Rhonda!  I can’t tell you how much I appreciated you taking the time to answer a few questions.

    You can find Rhonda at: http://www.rhondastapleton.com, http://www.rhondaedits.com/, on Facebook and on Twitter.  She’s also in charge of the Carina Press Facebook page. And reading her posts often makes me laugh very loudly.  Which can be a little embarrassing if I’m reading them on my smart phone at the mall.

     

    Rhonda Helms is the author of STUPID CUPID, FLIRTING WITH DISASTER, and PUCKER UP, a trilogy about a teenager who becomes a cupid, using PDA technology to make love matches for her high school. Out now with Simon Pulse! The 3-in-1 version, STRUCK, will be out in December.

    She also writes adult romances. SUPER ZERO, a superhero romantic comedy, is available in ebook!

    Rhonda works as a freelance editor for Carina Press, Harlequin’s e-publishing imprint, and she freelance edit manuscripts.

     

  • HOLD ME Countdown – The Day I Got The Call

    15 Days to Release Day!

     

    The day a writer gets “The Call” saying that somebody wants to acquire your book is a day about which many dream.  And if “The Call” is to say that an editor wants to acquire your first book, well, then the future just opens up, does it not?  It does!  When receiving such a call, the writer holds the phone receiver cradled to her cheek while, through eyes drowned with tears, she gazes into a sky filled with rainbows, and moonbeams.

    So, here’s how it happened with me.

    I had submitted HOLD ME to Carina Press and, after a month or two, I got an email from an editor named Rhonda with a “revise and return” request.  I about lost control of my bladder in excitement.  I had made call-backs!

    It took longer than it should have, but I made the changes and resubmitted.  Then I settled back to wait for the ultimate rejection.

    I’m a little insecure, okay?

    I don’t think it ever really occurred to me that I’d get “The Call.”  When I let myself consider that my book might be accepted, I figured I’d get “The Email.”  Everything else had been handled through email up to this point, so I thought the acceptance would be as well.

    So it didn’t dawn on me that I should actually answer my cell phone when it rang one afternoon in the Fall of 2010.  The caller’s number was unfamiliar, and I was at work.  I think there were people in my cubicle talking to me.  Besides, I’d been getting a lot of phone calls offering to lower my interest rates, and I thought it was one of them.  I looked at the incoming call, sneered, and sent the unknown caller directly to voice mail.

    I was surprised when I actually got a voice mail message, because those salespeople don’t usually leave one, but I ignored it.

    The next morning, I checked my cell phone and saw the voice mail message light.  “Oh, yeah,” I said.  “Maybe I should just delete it.”  Then I thought, “No.  Might as well listen.”

    I dialed into voice mail and there was this woman’s voice:  “Hello, this is Angela James from Carina Press…”

    What?  I listened to the message again.  Then again.  And every time I listened, it said the same thing.  Angela James, the Senior Editor from Carina Press was calling me to tell me that they wanted to acquire my book, if I was still interested.  She said that she’d sent an email.  I checked, and there was indeed an email saying basically the same thing as the voice mail.  They wanted my book.  They really did.

    And then…I screamed.  And almost lost control of my bladder.

    Yes, one of the most important moments in a writer’s life.  The first editor offering to acquire my first book.  The moment many writers dream of.

    And I sent “The Call” to voice mail.

    That’s just the way it goes sometimes.

    But I did get to save the message and listen to it over and over again.

     

     

  • HOLD ME Countdown – FBI Quiz Answers and a Winner!

    18  Days to Release Day!

     

    First let’s do the important stuff.  Who won the Amazon gift certificate?

    I chose the name in a very scientific manner.  I had 12 comments – remember it didn’t matter if your answers were right or wrong, anybody who commented was entered to win.  Anyway, I wrote everyone’s name on a piece of paper, crumbled them all up, shook them well, and had the name drawn by a non-participant (all stages of the process were documented).

    And the winner is:

    Cristina Genna!

    Congratulations Cristina!  Send an email to betsy AT betsyhorvath DOT com to claim your prize (and let me know the email address where it should be sent). Many thanks to everyone for playing, and I hope you all had a good time.

    Okay, now on the answers to our quiz.

    1. When was the FBI founded?

    A – 1908

    B 1929

    C 1935

    The FBI was originally called the Bureau of Investigation and was founded in 1908 during the presidency of William Howard Taft.

    2. The FBI motto is:

    A First, Best, and Invincible

    B Deal Fairly, Bear Witness, and Investigate

    C – Fidelity, Bravery, and Integrity

    The motto is on the FBI shield logo

    3. How many field and satellite offices does the FBI have?

    A 50 field offices, 420 satellite offices

    B – 56 field offices, 400 satellite offices

    C 60 field offices, 450 satellite offices

    There are also some foreign liaison offices, but I didn’t count those

    4. How many FBI Special Agents are there?

    A 11,000-12,999

    B – 13,000-14,999

    C 15,000-16,999

    There are currently 13,948 FBI special agents (not as many as you’d expect)

    5. How many FBI Special Agents are women?

    A – over 2000

    B over 2500

    C over 3000

    A vast improvement, but perhaps there should be more.

    6. When was the first female FBI Special Agent hired?

    A – 1910

    B 1945

    C 1972

     The first female agent was Emma Jentzler.  Now that I look at the reference again, it says “1910’s”, and it sounds like she was employed around 1917.  Her husband was a special agent as well.

    7. How many female agents were employed at the FBI when J. Edgar Hoover died?

    A 25

    B 10

    C – 0

    Yeah, there’s a shocker.  Apparently there were three female Special Agents at the Bureau when Hoover took control in 1924.  He forced two of them to resign immediately.  The third resigned in 1928.  After that there were no female Special Agents until after Hoover’s death in 1972.

    So there you go!  Some fun facts about the FBI to share with friends and loved ones.  Thank you all for playing, and I hope you had some fun.  And once again – CONGRATULATIONS CRISTINA!

     

    Here are references for the answers in the quiz: